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The charts below show the land area lost (thousand km2) per one-meter rise in sea level and the population (in million) affected per one-meter rise in sea level in the predicted future。

主体分段方法1：一图一段

开头段

The charts illustrate the predicted loss of land area and the number of people affected in six regions as a result of a one-metre rise in sea level.

概述段

Overall, Asia is by farthe most severely affected regionin both categories.However, the remaining five regionsdisplay considerable discrepanciesin the relationship between land loss and demographic impacts.

思路要点：

- Asia水土流失面积、受影响人口都最大

- 其他五个区域水土流失面积、受影响的人口规模之间关系呈现不同规律

Body paragraph 1

Regardingland loss, Asiais projected to lose450 thousand km² of land,followed byAmerica (160 thousand km2) and Europe (150 thousand km2). South Africa and Central Africaexperience relatively smaller losses, at 120 and 80 thousand km² respectively. Oceania,in contrast,is estimated to experience the least land loss, at only 10 thousand km².

思路要点：柱图

- Asia数据最高( 450 thousand km2)，America排第二(160 thousand km2) ，Europe排第三(150 thousand km2)

- Africa受影响程度中等，South Africa为120 thousand km2，Central Africa为80 thousand km2

- Oceania损失面积最小(10 thousand km2)

Body paragraph 2

As forpopulation impact, Asiaemerges as the most vulnerable regionagain, where 250 million people will be affected.Despiterelatively limited landloss, South Africa and Central Africarank second and third in terms ofdemographic consequences, with 117 million and 95 million people affected respectively. Americacomes nextwith 73 million people affected,in contrast toits second-place position for land loss.Conversely,despitea moderate level of land loss, merely 10 million people in Europe are predicted to be affected. This figure is five times as large as that in Oceania, whichremains the least affected region

思路要点：饼图

- Asia数据仍然最大(250 million)

- 尽管损失的土地面积不是很多，但受影响的人口方面South Africa排第二(117 million)，South Africa (95 million)

- America有73 million的人会受影响，排名和它损失土地面积的排名接近

- Europe土地损失面积中等，但受影响到的人只有10 million，是Oceania的5倍(Oceania受影响人数最低)