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The pie and bar charts below show the percentage of water consumption and use in Australia in 2004.
主体段分段思路：
一图一段
开头段
The pie chart compares the distribution of water consumption across different sectors in Australia in 2004, while the bar chart details how residential water was utilized in the same year.
概述段
Overall, residential water usagedominatedwater usage in 2004,withhousesusing substantially more water thanapartments.Withinthe residential sector, bathrooms and gardens werethe two leading categories.
思路要点：
- 居民用水(residential)占比最高，其中houses用水远超过apartments用水
- 居民用水中，bathroom、garden用水量最高
Body paragraph 1
Regardingnational water consumption, 70% of the water in Australia was utilized for residential purposes,split between57% for houses and 13% for apartments. Industrial and business water userepresented similar proportions, at 11% and 10% respectively.By contrast, a mere 6% of the water consumed nationwide went to governments,twice the figurefor other purposes.
【思路要点】：饼图
- residential占比最高（70%），其中用于houses的占比为57%，apartments占比为13%
- industry、business占比相似，分别为11%和10%
- government用水占比仅为6%，是other的2倍
Body paragraph 2
Turning tohousehold water usage, bathroom usetook the leadat 28%,closely followed bygarden irrigation at 27%. Laundryconstituted one-fifth ofthe residential water consumption,surpassingtoilet flushingby 5%.Conversely, kitchen activities consumed just 10% of household water,representing the smallest water-use category.
【思路要点】：柱图
- bathroom用水占比最高(28%)，garden用水排第二(27%)
- washing clothes用水占比为20%，比toilet用水高5%
- kitchen用水仅为10%，占比最低
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